"Grey, elemental affinity, zero" The Elder announced the result loudly
On hearing this, it was like a bolt of lightning struck Grey, he stood there dumbfounded and just stared at the Elder.
Shocked voices could be heard from the people and there was some which were also filled with scorn.
Grey stood dazed amidst all the noises without any reactions. One word was constantly reverberating in his head, 'How?'.
'Why, why did this happen to me?' Grey asked himself over and over again
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Unbeknownst to Grey, something greater lies in wait in his body....
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P.S: When I started this book I had zero writing experience, so the first chapters aren't that great, although, my writing quality has improved over time. Also, English isn't my first language, so there are some instances where my choice of words are not good enough for what I'm trying to portray. A heads up, the book will be using a medieval setting. My world building is not the best, but it gets better over time, so bear with me on the early chapters!
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wait so I thought at begining friends were kinda bad cause mc will just out grow them as talent can grow but that seems to not be the case? and they stick with him the whole novel? like how? dead weight? or stupid random power ups? mc gives them power ups? author? legit how?
I'm currently at chapter 246. Please give me motivation to continue reading as I am in the verge of giving upš
continuation of my earlier commentā¦Spoiler Alert klaus⦠ik his character is supposed to be that way but man he irritates me so much. like okay youāre the āfun guyā of the group. we get it but would it kill you to not say bullshit every time you open your mouth? and aliceās whole persona is based on two things- 1) she likes fighting and beating people up and 2) threatens to beat people up.
i feel like just to add comic relief to the story the author has made the characters really dumb. like there are jokes and many situations that are supposed to be funny but iām just finding them hella annoying. there are many situations where iām just cringing at whatās happening. (iām at ch 200) i like the underlying plot and the concept of the cultivation system but this could srsly be so much better if the characters were a bit smarter and the cliche jokes would be less. also i gotta mention smth i found annoying Spoiler Alert thereās a situation where the mc doesnāt kill some ppl because āheās not in the mood to kill. ā like what?! and he doesnāt even know why and his frnds just accept it like āoh it happens sometimesā srsly?!!
Is there FL in the story If there is when will she appear
No Harem? I'm out
Can anyone explain the cultivation levels without spoilers
I gonna give my opinion after reading until chapter 780. You can find Mc annoying specially in first chapters but he becomes less annoying when you keep reading. The novel isnt the best but is decent specially if you want to binge read something. The worst thing of this novel in my opinion is Klause personality
After chapter 220s it goes down hill. It's becomes slow as hell. MC is a naive fool. Side characters especially Klause is most annoying, i mean same lame jokes again and again. Alice character is just lacking in every sense. Sometimes it get so cringy. I mean after 3 years of training in academy mc and his friends are naive piece of fu*king shit. Instead of maturing after going through so much trouble MC and side Characters become more and more dumb. That's it I can't take this shit anymore i m out. Note- I would like to thank author for giving initial decent chapter. I really hope in future work you make character grow through out the novel not just write same cringe dialogu.
Meh story is cool but mcs personality is just too bad for me