Dungeon Predator (WN)

Honestly a ver bad start. Too many useless forced plots, why have to be accident, why have to be coma, why have to start so many years after the game started, why have to completely stay away from games while recovering, why not start the game when u have already recovered and is just training. There's just completely zero reason. The author doesn't understand that in an mmorpg, it's nigh impossible to catch up with someone that has monopolized all the important stars, rewards and items for so many years. Just that one single advantage can completely overturn all the efforts and items someone has invested in for years? The author is too delusional

Basically the same thing I said in my comment. Great story, strong beginning, holds very well until the Empire war where it starts to lack a stub stance but makes up for it in action, ending slightly rushed with lacking progression details but the way the writer ends the story is quite wholesome and realistic. Just wish there was more detail at the end. P. S. since I’m on mobile, I can’t select a half star so I will give a 5 since I really don’t want to lower my rating

It's a pretty generic LitRPG novel but it has a few unique aspects and it's definitely one of the better ones. Overall, I might be biased here because I just like these kinds of novels, but 4/5 imo.

Feeling bias but the character development for the MC's family feels poor, like its as if the story just skip through them. Also didnt really enjoy the lack of depth for his ability💀. (Its good if your bored, dont let me stop you 👍) My opinion is irrelevant

This is the first novel of this particular subgenre that I've read, and I gotta say that it's impressive. MC is an asshole okay? But he kinda has to be because he has no time to just wait around. I've heard of overgeared and see references to it in the main page comments, and I think from what I understand the MC there is also an asshole, but the MC here is not a loser unlike the overgeared one (yes i looked up his character traits just to make sure). He just has no time for nonsense and needs to develop himself so that he can support his family. But he does change overtime, falls in love, which is great to see because he's slowly gaming less for obligation and more because he loves it. The plot is excellent, the worldbuilding is great, fight scenes are well done, the NPCs don't feel like NPCs and their deaths actually make you feel hurt, showing that the author does not do flat characters at all. My point is if you like VRMMORPG style novels with substance, this is a great one.

Awesome novel and nice story with human psych evolution besides the character development is also quite good with an more Awesome male protagonist and thanks for this novel 😁👍