My Hermes System (Web Novel)

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15 users have written reviews for the My Hermes System (Web Novel) novel and rated it with an average score of 3.9 out of 5. Our novel is ranked 497th among all the novels in the Light Novel World platform.

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IllMatic 9
Chapter 194 yesterday
(2.0)

This story starts off fine enough, a bit too edgy and generic, but the character interactions were interesting so the start gets a pass from me. As it tries to set up a plot it goes downhill almost immediately. Everything that happens feels generic and contrived. Be it the reason why the government wants to arrest him, the d*mb*ss redemption arc they give the person who tried killing him and his sister or the cringy stuff the writer does with his relationships, it all makes the story not a great experience IMO If I was being more fair I might give this a 3, but I'm writing this review after an adult saw the MC kissing someone and ran down a hallway shouting ''omg they're kissing'' like a preschooler. And that moment, coupled with a few moments similar that happen in the story drop it another point

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Sin_Of_Humans 1
Chapter 445 6 days ago
(4.0)

First novel I finished. I read Lord of the mysteries Vampire system Author's Point of view and many more but this one was the best don't let hate comments get to you.

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book_worm 46
Chapter 445 8 months ago
(4.0)

It's a fun read if you don't try to diss every little thing that happens, I had a good time reading it. The sole reason I started it is because this novel and Villain Retirement are kinda linked, not much but it's still there. And also, there's greek and Norse mythology so there's that. If you want something to pass your time while you're stacking your favourite novel then this is it.

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Jamalican 41
Chapter n/a 11 months ago
(2.0)

this is a mickey mouse novel man it starts off pretty aight and just snowballs off a cliff and keeps going like its absolutely mindblowing the twists youll see the author just make out of nowhere. shame my comments are gone but i dont think you should even see the novel to begin with lol i stuck with it cause i was in too deep to just give up + i like speedsters and systems so i was like aight ill keep going but so many random things happen and so many moments of wtf writing make it hard to genuinely care, at most i was just reading to finish or see wth the author creates next lol. overall not worth but i think theres some people who might get a laugh at the dice rolls that are each arc lol

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lnwUser90621 0
Chapter n/a 2 years ago
(2.0)

Honestly if I wrote this review ore chapter 200 I'd have given it 4,maybe even 5 stars, but timeskips, especially un-uniform with everyone skipping randomly, characters dying off off screen, and nobody ever winning except for the "villian" of the story, not even the MC, I honestly can't say that I would recommend this to anyone I liked. He/she mixed up roughly 2 or 3 times a chapter, which is very immersion breaking. Honestly feels like the author had no real planned story, even a rough outline, or if he did he didn't show it to anyone and ask "dies this idea sound like it could possibly work". Feels like the author went with a game of thrones vibe, but didn't realize that that only worked cause there were so many characters people liked, and just ended up with a sad, pathetic attempt... Or whatever this is.

I'd honestly have preferred the ending of the book to be the explosion, I'd never have seen it coming and would have been like "wow" but the way it went? Feels like I just read a 300 chapter prolog to what you actually wanted the story to be, that could have been summarised in 1--> 3 chapters and avoided me wasting my time

Overall great beginning, but fell off as many original novels do.

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ILucas777 0
Chapter n/a 2 years ago
(5.0)

It has it's ups and downs but overall it's been a pretty enjoyable/captivating reading and since the arc I'm at now has gotten me pretty riled up for the history I will give this one a 5 stars review. For the record I'm at chapter 314, and I definitely recommend it.

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Thunderheadz 0
Chapter n/a 2 years ago
(5.0)

Why is this so good? For all the people who talk poorly of it, they have not reached chapter 200 and beyond. This has quickly entered my top favorites and I had no clue it would happen. I honestly felt dissuaded by the negative reviews but now I can only say the jokes on them for not being able to feel their heartbeat as fast as the protagonist can run.

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putulamma 0
Chapter n/a 2 years ago
(2.0)

It started pretty good, but as i read more i dislike the way to level up their system because it just didn't make sense for me (or maybe it just didn't suit my taste hahaha).

The story itself started to get boring when i reached The Pit Arc and i lost interest.

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FrostyZee 1
Chapter n/a 2 years ago
(4.0)

Didn't expect to drag me into it's world, but it did. The character development of the protagonist is a bit rushed but well thought out. The world is absolute marvel. The different characters is unique. All in all, it is very good read.

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ColdDemonSlayer 5
Chapter n/a 2 years ago
(5.0)

Wow. I think I’ve fallen in love with this novel wtf it’s amazing. My heart literally got crushed when they showed the red haired boys backstory. I was literally yelling for the mc not to put him in hell. And then gerald’s backstory aswell mmmmmmm .
Also the big titty milfs omg this novel has it all. I love this bruh

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