My Vampire System (WN)

Honest review don't dislike - It's very good novel. . . you can go ahead and read it. It's just that author made it unnecessary long. I mean it already have a ending and a good ending but author was hoping to stretch it and time skipped 1000 years. . . all of his friends are either old or died. It starts to decline after time skip. . . but very good to read , you will enjoy it.

I thought I could handle it but I couldn't. You can feel the MC Halo going overwork trying to save his buttocks, it dumb-fy every other character around him to make them allies and that's annoying. Maybe if I was younger I could have read this? If I hadn't read many books and my expectations were low, I could have read more than 200 chapters, maybe.

I have never rates a novel 1-star. But this. . . This deserves it. For the people who are saying it doesn't deserve the hate, first of all, it's worse than mid. The authors recent novel the dark magus returns is also very bad considering the fact that it's supposed to be his 5th novel that he's writing among all the ones he wrote which contains millions of words. People are saying he doesn't improve but the truth is, he's just doing this for money. He doesn't give an actual sh*t about novel but just money and there are some idiotic fans and bots he has bought to help him in that Never trust the ratings on that app, and if first timers want to read it, hell no. It's brain rot please. Better read the top 3 or any other novels in this site

ok this novel doesn't serve the hate it gates, yeah mostly the magic is in the word "mostly" that's why it is four stars instead of five, four I say, why? because the ending is just some sh*t made up whatever that is, it is like someone else came up with the novel then someone else wrote the ending, I mean it does not take a professional to see that the ending is sh*t and sh*t I say

So knowing this was one of the original flagship novels in WN I was a bit hyped to see what it was all about. However, it looks like it really was not anything that good. Now I'm not sure about the rest of the story but the academy arc is just dragging along and is just getting dreadfully dull at this point. If I'm getting this right, humanity is under threat (currently under ceasefire) from some mystical alien race and to prepare for the inevitable conflict they train and power up everyone, right? Apparently not since the whole society is now based on everyone's power level and of course those on top would not want for new stronger poeple to crop up. This is just the least idiotic thing in the entire setting. I had to stop reading since it was bad for my blood pressure and based on what other poeple had been saying it would just continue to drag on and on. I do not have the patience to wait for the story to get good! To others who just want to enjoy a no brainer story then this is indeed a good enough diversion. Just be warned not to expect anything brilliant and just enjoy the ride.

I read this novel until chapter 23 and at first I like the world building, character, and the plot. But, I was honestly disappointed after finding out this novel has a love triangle with Quinn X Layla and Vorden X Layla. I hate love triangles because it ruins the story. Well, at least Layla married Quinn in the end and have a child but this love triangle stuff sucks. It's even better if they didn't involve Vorden and just become a best wingman that support the MC. If there were a 0 star then most likely I rate this to 0.

My vampire system is a classic. It deserves respect because it influenced a lot of other novels. That said if you are a new reader I recommend lowering your expectations. I liked when I read it 2 years ago but now on the reread its not as enjoyable as I remembered it back then. The worldbulding is not great and the characters are kinda one dimensional. However if you want a novel that you can turn your brain off and just enjoy the ride it can be a good suggestion. 3/5

Juveline writing, dumb MC (to be fair, he starts out an orphan child), incongruent social dynamics, poor worldbuilding. This is all my personal, opinion of course. This is fine as an introduction to LN to younger audiences.

The Mc is just awful, the history is awful, you only read about the side character, where is the sauceeeeeeeeeeee, if there is a Mc, it should be showed.

Part 1 was so good I couldn't put the book down. It was well written, easy enough to follow, and it broke me when some of the characters diec. I adored it so much. Part 2 dragged and I didn't agree with the ending. It was poorly edited, tons of misspellings of character names, and entire plot line that didn't make sense. Characters that existed for their only purpose to be killed. And the ending was incredibly out of character for the MC. There are big chunks of time where the story will focus on others but the MC. The MC will show up for a chapter only to be pushed aside again for several more chapters. The battle scenes will switch POV frequently without notice so it's hard to follow. If you stop after Part 1 you won't miss that much. I adored Part 1 so much that I couldn't wait for Part 2 and it was a complete let down.