I'm captured? Fine, I can't help it since I can't move.
Experimented on? At least give me some anaesthetic.
I'm freed? Let me get some revenge.
Want to plead for your life? Sorry, this miss here holds a grudge.
I destroyed the lab so now let me explore this world freely.
I somehow joined Mr Hero's party. Fine, he seems fun.
"Aiya, how cruel. For the honour of being a hero you'd kill this missy huh?" She smiled whilst bleeding out.
"Che, you still have the mind to joke right now?" He said with a glare.
"What is life if not to enjoy every moment? Since I'm going to die and I can't avenge myself, I hope someone else does."
"No one will. You were the only one who was more powerful than I with your Nanomancy. Now with you out of th-"
"Hush child. I'm trying to die in peace here."
"But I'm ol-!"
"Ap! Good children don't disturb their elders."
"But yo-!"
"Bye~" She grinned before losing strength.
"FUCK!"
…
Why am I sleeping in the snowfields?
Mr Wolves are growling at me. Hungry huh?... Me too.
This is my second book please have mercy on this author. Enjoy.
Nanomancer=A mage that uses nanobots
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Comments on the novel chapters for the last week.
I would've liked a decent amount of basic science understanding behind the characterization in the story. What I mean is you wrote the novel with the major theme of a person who carries nanites and uses nanotech to fashion needful weapons/items, etc. Shouldn't you then already know the total amount of nanite mass you carry limits the mass of what you create? If you had 100 pounds of nanites in your body, how can you create say a 2 ton weapon or item? For the most part, the author does stay within reason, but there were times of going well beyond what I was referring to.
Sh*t I am jumping from novel to novel guess I will settle and continue this.
man what a waste ... it felt like the author couldnt decide between a lot of things and kept going on whim during several core moments. I had a lot of fun until chapter 700 or so tho so i guess i kinda recomend it ? after that i hated everything
Besides my review I'll leave this rating system for those that want a quick scale. [Warning] This novel is heavily rushed and basically dropped. While it does have an ending it leaves much to be desired. My review [Pending as of 12/12/23] explains my grievances. Everything from, chapter 1- around 900 (where the age of gods starts) Characters/character development: 9/10 Plot: 8/10 World building: 9/10 Imagery: 9/10 Enjoyment: 8/10 Overall: 8.8/10 Everything after that new age, chapter 900-finale. Characters/character development: 6/10 Plot: 3/10 World building: 3/10 Imagery: 8/10 Enjoyment: 2/10 Overall: 4/10
Wait. Someone I don’t care about spoilers. Who does she get together with in the end?
10/10 My headcannon is that mc will become a futa after the main story to make children.
I'm going to writing my thoughts on the book at certain points there will be no spoilers so read if you want. The section I will be reviewing is ch 0 to 100 Characters/character development: 9.5/10 Plot: 8/10 World building: 7.5/10 Imagery: 8/10 Enjoyment: 9/10 Overall: 8.5/10
At what chapter number does she kill that "hero"?
Although the ending feels a bit sudden, it‘s not bad. It‘s just sad, that it is now completed… I would have loved to read more (especially these slice of life-like moments in between were really interesting to me…)
lol I stopped reading for a bit, checked it again and now I‘m learning that it‘s already completed..?! wtf