Primordial 'Dual Cultivator' Dragon With System

It's a good read. . . if u just fill the grammar mistakes and get pass the first few chapters. . . one thing that i like is he uses his system frequently. . . as in some novels system gets back seat. . . but everyone has their own tastes. . . so give it a try if u like 😊

So it's basically filled with *nc*st. And there is a lust spirit or whatever it is with appearance of a 10 year old girl who is constantly doing sexual activities with the MC . i know its sm*t and we all here are not any pure , innocent soul but still it wasn't enjoyable reading this particular side of this story. (No offense. Just my personal opinion)

It's full of misteries, can't think about what is about to happen. There is many things about relationship to think about, MC is badass but he is weak. Thank you for your work.

I liked this part and to think that she was the trigger. Are you surprised to see me still alive now?" "How can you still be alive? You should have died in that ravine!" Chen Hong asked as he stared at Ling Yun with narrowed eyes. "Honestly, I feel grateful to you for ordering your men to dump me in that ravine back then, and I am here now because of that. " Suddenly, Ling Yun took out the Chaos Dragon Broadsword and pointed it forward, and his gaze turned cold. "However, the current me now is not the old me, and I will get revenge on you today. " Chen Hong snorted, took out his long sword, and pointed it at Ling Yun. you haven't been a cultivator for long, so you can never defeat me, let alone kill me. Since you didn't die that day, I'll kill you with my hands today, and I'll get Wen Qing back later. " Due to his arrogance, Chen Hong did not even ask about Ling Yun's true identity and looking down on him.

*Story Quality: Mid I've read a lot of sm*t cultivation light novels and this is pretty average for the genre. It hits all the usual story beats, and spends slightly more time progressing the plot than it does with the s*x scenes. Comparatively, I've read some stories whose plot has a LOT more potential, but development is dragged into the mud by the s*x scenes. So at least this average plot is steadily developed. *Writing Quality: Mid. I'm excluding grammer and spelling on the account that English is not the author's first language. What I really care about is whether the writing is engaging or not, and in that regard its pretty basic. *Romance: low. MC's got 50+ women now, which means the story has no time to develop relationships between them and the MC. Each girl is just another pin for the MC's vest. PokemonMax+ *S*x: low. It's quite repetitive: v*g*n*l, *n*l, and BJs only. At the begining the author had some k*nky girl-on-girl play during threesomes with the MC, but later on the author dropped that and made all the women sexually interact with only the MC. Now the author doesn't even go into much detail with his scenes. The only k*nky factor left is the *nc*st, and even that has hit the back burners in recent chapters.

I mean it's not all that bad, it's not for me but I don't get all the hate? Sure some Grammar mistakes here and there, but that won't kill you. . . Just fill in said "Grammer Mistakes" in your Head. This Novel could be a whole lot better. But doesn't deserve all the hate atleast IMO. If you're thinking about reading this give it a Taste. You might like it. Just don't look at the rest of the Reviews 💀 or comments😭

In the beginning it was fine, the romance flowed smoothly. But at a certain point he added so many women that I don't remember half of the MC's harem. It's a little tiring but the romance is more or less.

So far so good although some of it is questionable it's still not toxic enough to make me stop reading I'm in chapter37 let's be honest it feels lacking like I was reading some facts text without emotion evoking words and sentence but I'll give this 3 as it doesn't deserve to be 1 because the author is working hard

look, I'll be very honest, this work is of very low quality, so if you are a morally upright person or are looking for an average or high quality read then this work is not for you, you can try reading the s*x scenes are not very good ones too, so be warned, and I stopped reading at chapter 10, if you are a person who likes reading this kind of trashy work with a lot of s*x, *nc*st etc then maybe you will like it anyway I won't stay here cursing for hinder the experience of those who enjoy the work so goodbye my noble companions, see you in other soap operas

I dint understand why it has a 2 star rating but is not bad at all, yea the names are hard to remember but thats it. At first when i saw this novel i was turned off by the rating so I didn’t read it but after taking a break from my other novels i was reading i gave it a try and it is pretty good. If you are new to this website do not trust the reviews or the ratings at all, i had the exact same experience with “dragon monarch system” which is also pretty good but had a terrible rating