Provocative Fiery Wife: My Superior is a Affectionate Spitfire

The female lead is a dunce. Every single person she has a high opinion of seems to be a secret antagonist. From her cousin to her uncle to her friend to her ex-boyfriend to her blind date. And it is constantly frustrating how she keeps treating these people as if they are genuine towards her. In fact frustration seems to be name of the game here since plotlines are dragged on well past their use-by-date. SPOILER: The two leads have a semi-one night stand, and when the male lead takes over her company she spends nearly 70 chapters constantly hiding herself from him. BUT it is always the Female Lead who somehow sees/hears him first so she has a chance to hide or disguise herself. Unbelievable so. Out of around 10 encounters, she sees/hears him first.

Massive continuity errors. Plot-line revolves around some of them, so they can’t be easily fixed or looked past. It will become extremely frustrating. The usual issues with translation work (wrong gender pronouns), as well as the issue with time (why say a day has passed and then say it’s been weeks or months? And how can do much be accomplished in short periods of time, when you have to account for labor, the time it takes to do something, plus travel time?). Those are usual errors… but forgetting what you wrote, in the same dang chapter? Creating important people or things and the. Forgetting their existence? Writing that the character grew into a strong and independent woman, and then making her dependent on a seriously narcissistic tyrant of a guy, who dictates when she can work, what she can do, who she can talk to, what clothes she can wear? Say she loves her kids but then leaves them (4-5 yrs old) alone, or in the hands of people who badmouth or hate her, or who cause them harm…