List of reviews made by users for the System's POV novel.
12 users have written reviews for the System's POV novel and rated it with an average score of 3.3 out of 5. Our novel is ranked 133rd among all the novels in the Light Novel World platform.
12 Reviews
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Plot:4/5 since it's a very common trope Characters:5/5 like the characters and how each one of them play a role in the story World building:4/5 would want to see a map of both worlds Progression:5/5 everything after the time skip is perfectly done. . . no dragging it out or unnecessary chapters. . . each one slowly moves the story
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The author always uses his crutch called harem and system there is nothing inheriently unique about his stories and they follow the same genreric motions that most do, I personally don't like the story but I like stories that i would consider worse, maybe it is just the fact of harem and systems that turn me off however they can both be executed well but I just don't feel the systems was done well. But it is worth a try if you like systems, i just didn't find it very unique.
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The synapses of the plot made it look interesting but the mc maintains an excessive amount of knowledge that really makes any growth or obstruction feel boring I don't think I got very far but it had already felt repetitive and dull I think the plot has potential but it could really use some better direction and steady progression
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Fizonel mentioned reviewing to express one's opinion, so I guess I'm writing one now. Personally I dislike the author immensely. I always give his novels a try since they gain popularity, but they just don't stick for me. I have novel binging burnout right now, so most novels don't seem too good, however, Elyon's pieces always feel like saturated junk food. Give it a try if you enjoy the classic fantasy dream of fulfilling man's desires. In my opinion though, it's not too good.
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Any of Elyon's work are what I would say aim for the shonen(kid) demographic. If you are new to novels you will have a blast with his novels just like how I used to think Sword Art Online is the best anime and Kirito is the best protagonist, same with anime like Mirai Nikki and Akame ga kill. If you see some of Elyon's reply you can see he isn't exactly what you would call mature himself and that shows in his story-style as well. It's still pretty entertaining novel so I give it a 3 star. Delicious junk-food but the type that makes you feel greasy and unhealthy afterwords.
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It was a pain to read. Edgy, uninteresting, copy-paste. No common sense since the start, everything just kind of happens. Generic everyone against MC is dumb/evil, MC is perfect/great/intelligent. Nothing new for this kind of novels tbh, but I decided to hate on this one.
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It's still better than an edgy h*rny kid like you LMAO. You really think that posting a 1 star review here affects this novel. What a joke. You must have been kicked by a donkey in the head when you were a kid LUL!
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The funny thing is that you can't take criticism. Be an adult, don't do stupid things.
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?. Is there something wrong with you? Any specific reason you're glazing? I can call a psychiatrist if you need one. Bless you
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No? But, is there is something wrong with you? I can see a retarded person when I see one. You should call that Psychiatrist. You'll need them. Bless you.
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The only person you can see is the reflection of yourself... Are you calling yourself retarded? You're the one attacking for no reason over a opinion mate, get a grip. Bless you.
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This is my opinion of you. You are retarded. Bless you LMAO!
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That's not a opinion, that's a personal attack with no basis. Bless you.
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That's an opinion. If you don't understand then that's fine. Bless you.
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yo elyon my man, don't mind the criticisms just take it and use it to pump out more good stuff. you're def improving in terms of writing so keep up the good work.. im interested in reading a story from you without the power of systems if yk what i mean
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THIS GUY IS THE AUTHOR? BRUH. Didn't even know lmao. For your information, I have read your other novels Elyon, I haven't liked a single one. Non of them pass the 4 star mark (a very easy to achieve thing because people are REALLY lax with reviews) People were already kind of fed up with your novels. This little show of lack of braincells from your part didn't do you any favors as well, lmao.
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Lmao. Bless your heart, to insane levels.
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This novel is good. for the people who thinks it's bad. you can try to read this novel without reading comments. it's a stupidity. Thanks to author.
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No spoilers since all of this in the first 5 chapters: Besides the lack of common sense and uninteresting writing; Author read Shadows Slave and lazily took everything and renamed it; First Nightmare -> First Wandering, Echo's -> Avatars, etc. . Don't even bother even if you're bored. Read something else.
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I am not exactly a fan of the novel but that's a very narrow minded criticism. In that sense every Isekai novel is a copy of Mushoku Tensei, every cultivation novel is a copy of classic Chinese Folklores I would like to dare you to go to RI review page and say "its just a copy of Chinese Folklores." The world take inspiration from Shadow Slave's world and power system but the story itself possess almost no similarity. Elyon himself in the synopsis said he takes inspiration from other novels. Besides it's kinda cruel to expect authors to create there own power-system/world with every novel. Only a few madlad authors like Warmasiac, Guilty3, Lordstek and some others are able to pull this off
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Look, normally I wouldn't mind, but read this and tell me it's not plagiarism; from Chapter 13: "After successfully finishing her First Wandering and gaining the power from The One, only then would she be able to teleport through the shadows, unleashing deadly attacks that could catch her opponents by surprise." Like I wouldn't mind restyling old ideas, plenty of novels do this to no end. But like.. don't copy 1:1 and expect us to enjoy it.
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All the comments are talking about harem but I've read it up to chapter 175 and saw zero cringe worthy harem stuff. The mc is very smart and working in every way possible to profit and achieve good results and got zero attraction to girls at the moment and him being a emotionless system before is learning about the raw intensity of human emotions and is very calculative and clever. Altogether this is a decent read of u got nothing else to do or if you are just burnt out from reading other things
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System God must love tragedies. Hopefully Thirteen can break the curse! Interesting use of an intelligent system as the MC instead of a usual character. Elyon sure never fails to excite us with fun story formats!
there's no harem????