The Villain's Side of the Novel

Does it have potential? Yes it does. How's the writing style? He slurred his words like a drunk dude trying to speak but instead of slurring while speaking he is slurring while writing. Example: aboooooouttt tdis he would fittge And most funny is the fighting sounds. Even a child can make up batter fighting sounds then author. The story got potential it's just that the author doesn't know how to write properly yet. He is still learning. Most of the story is like someone is telling you facts instead of narrating the story. There are many grammar mistakes. As for the story I can confidently say that the author know what he wants form the story at the very least. But he can't put it into words maybe because of lack of words to express himself. Raven out. Happy reading guys

Its good and has a lot of potential. Mc is cold and thinks logically. I liked the new writing style and hope grammatical mistakes can be avoided in the future. There is a lot of room for character development of the protagonist(*hero~Luke/Lucas whatever his name was) as he sound dumb. Overall I recommend giving it a try atleast.

in my opinion, it's a good novel . . . of course, interesting novels always have annoying flaws. 1. The update of the story takes a long time. 2. the most important part of the event is always not disclosed. 3. the number of words per chapter is pathetic. 4. The topic of story content in one chapter is sometimes in vain just to discuss one thing.

It is a good novel with an interesting beginning. The MC is a smart guy who always thinks things through before acting and is ruthless when the situation calls for it. Although the story is still not very clear, the little that has been shown promises.

It is an ok story and everything is excellent except antagonist and female characters they feels very one dimensional just like any npc. Another reason I gave it a 3 star is due slow update of chapters

This novel is one of the best if not the best villain point of view novel. In Webtrash(Webnovel) you will find hundreds of novel on same genre, but almost all of them share a same problem, in those novle the protagonist of the original plot is shown as a villain if not outright as an antagonist. What I love most about this novel is there is no such halfa$$ problem. If you change your POV you'll see protagonist of the original plot is talented, smart and have a disgusting level of sense of Justice. He doesn't shy away to use underhanded method, this makes him a three dimensional character. If you ask me if I like his character that's a big NO, he thinks that the world revolve around him, his opinion is that's the only thing that matters it's kinda piss me of.

It is a very good novel with a fearless protagonist who thinks before acting and is ruthless when the situations require it. The context at the beginning of the novel is interesting, we quickly learn about the world around us and the challenge that our Mc must overcome, which makes it easier for us to understand him and accept his actions. It is a novel that I advise everyone to try and give a chance. to better success dear author!

I've read my fair share of Chinese villains doing uno face slaps to the heavens chosen protagonist but most had similar plot progressions but lo and behold a diamond in the rough the novel starts out with a predictable transmigration or Isekai setting but unexpectedly you get a twist stright from the beginning and boy this story is engaging the MC well his quite interesting! I'll be honest here though the beat down he gives to the loser protagonist is so satisfying! If you've caught up to recent chapters and if your interested in revenge type plots give this novel a try because I'll still be reading untill I find out what happens to the wench! That played the mc heart strings!