White Online

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List of reviews made by users for the White Online novel.

76 users have written reviews for the White Online novel and rated it with an average score of 3.3 out of 5. Our novel is ranked 319th among all the novels in the Light Novel World platform.

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Quatach_Ichl 5
Chapter 97 one month ago
(2.0)

was just here because i wanted to read something to occupy my mind but the writing was so bad the synergy was just im not going to lie i lost some braincells reading this and its not often that, whatever ig what i want to say is that everything is going good for mc he got a harem going on everyone wants to f*ck him or crossdress him because he is apparently so f*ck*ng cute or handsome? idk man i just know one thing author doesn’t come from the same world as i do jesus

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Bobbyodalee 6
Chapter 334 3 months ago
(4.0)

I Like the overall premise of the story, it's more light hearted and relaxing and gives off this cozy vibe. But it can be hard to read at sometimes when the MC and other characters are annoying or weird, but overall nice read

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GRIMREAPER 3
Chapter n/a 7 months ago
(4.0)

The book was very good at the start of the story with a lot of plot and advancements. But after a while I got the feeling that the author was not putting as much effort into the story as he did before. The ending is very nice for the story and gives you a nice sense of closure.

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Kusada 11
Chapter 595 7 months ago
(3.0)

novel is good at the start, i was immersed on the vr story but man mc was too dense it was frustrating sometimes. and all the girls/women attitude, c'mon man

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_WARLORD_ 3
Chapter 706 7 months ago
(3.0)

The starting chapters of the story is great, romance was good, even fight scenes are well explained. Then comes the revenge part of the story it was so frustrating that I would have dropped this novel because it was said that it is an intelligent mc but what author done is except mc he made every other side character dumb. I am giving this 3 stars just because the ending is satisfying which is rare.

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Armin 16
Chapter 706 7 months ago
(3.0)

This had a really good start but definitely gonna disappoint you in the middle to the end of the novel . Everything's scale is too much I mean author made a really really really big world and couldn't handle it so when this happened what did he do ?? First neglected a lot of charecters Second mixed them at the end of the novel and make a mess . The final war is a total mess and author didn't show us the fight between mc and the Final Boss he just time skipped it . Romance is not good either let me tell you why : met her once in the game then accidentally saw her in hospital in reall life and BANG now their together no real development and her only trait is that she's a yandere . One thing I didn't like ( but many may like ) is his weapon , it's a musket and you can tell how limited he can be . But will all of these negative points it can be enjoyable especially for those who are reading this genre fotmr their their first time . One final advice always read some chapters and don't rely only on reviews and comments bc everyone have their own likes and dislikes so you may read it and reallly like this 😁👋

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AelarIce 10
Chapter 706 7 months ago
(4.0)

Pretty good at the beginning, although it drops in quality later. It's not very consistent with power levels, I feel like he does pretty good at the beginning and is one of the top players, but that doesn't seem to be case anymore later. He should be a brilliant genius, but is not extraordinary smart, the opposite actually sometimes. It's like he gets a power-up when he gets too weak, instead of gradually growing stronger. The ending also came pretty abrupt/rushed, or at least I didn't see it coming a dozen chapters before, considering how strong he was then. But nonetheless, it was an entertaining novel and I'd recommend to try it, you can just stop if the quality gets too bad for you, I guess.

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footfall 3
Chapter 706 8 months ago
(4.0)

Just finished reading and i wanted to write a review. The story concept is great and in the beginning the writing was good as well, however after about the middle of the book there were lots of holes in the story and quite a few things that did not make sense. The end was very rushed, so I think this book is worth 3 stars but since I am fed up with stories that are dropped mid way I gave it 4 stars as the author made an effort to close the story with an ending.

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lnwUser80944 11
Chapter 706 8 months ago
(3.0)

Stsrted off great but after vol1, everything became rushed and full of holes, and close to the end he became so OP somehow, and kept us waiting like Jin Mori did in Ragnarok, and than ended it all in a punch, like what? PPL IF YOU READ THIS STOP AT VOLUME 1

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Caveman 21
Chapter n/a 8 months ago
(1.0)

I wasn't originally going to do this, but screw it. this is the worst novel ive read. it reminds me of super gene, which i think is better. the first 300 chapters or so of this novel werent bad, and i saw a lot of potential to make a really good novel. the author had put his other novel, "martial arts system" on hiatus to work on this one. the author mentioned how he was really liking work on this novel too. well after around chap 300 i believe, it just started going downhill i mean i already had many problems with it, like how the mc who is a "genius" is just a m*r*n sometimes. or how a bullet, which moves faster than the speed of sound, is always heard by the enemy. . . the ending in this novel btw is by far the worst writing ive ever seen. i cant explain it too well without spoiling, but basically like a 50-150 chapter buildup ends in like a total of around 5 paragraphs id say. btw the final fight of the novel is offscreen and only gets around 2 paragraphs to itself. also the mc's strength is scaled stupidly. ill use a fake connection so that i dont spoil so keep in mind this isnt to scale and isnt a part of the story. the mc would go from lets say like some hella strong guy that can blow up a planet with his strongest attack. then in around 100 chapters, he goes from that to being able to destroy the whole galaxy with his strongest attack. . . and then the novel ends.

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